Sunday, February 20, 2011

68. Storm

Genre: Drama
Characters:  Wilson, Cian, Ramone
Prompt: 68. Storm
Word Count: 600 ish
Rating: M
Type: series
Summary: Wilson goes off
Warnings: Language, violence
** Sucky photoshoped rain. Sucky writing.








Wilson’s fist connected with the soft flesh of Ramone’s lips, the single blow knocked him off of his feet.

"I don't hear you talking that shit now!" Wilson shouted, circling him like a shark to it's wounded prey.
“You get off on hurting women, huh?” Wilson paced, “Mr. Cool, Rico motherfucking Suave himself is a woman beater?”  He chuckled, nudging Ramone with his foot. "Has to force women to do what he wants?" He’d lost it, all sense of being calm, rational, and being strong for Cian. Ramone had pushed him to the point of no return and he'd allowed it, charged him like a raging bull, an angry lion protecting its mate. 
“Get up, Bitch!” Wilson shouted, drawing back his foot, kicking Ramone hard in his ribs. “You can hit women, get up and hit me!” He continued to kick Ramone with each attempt to get up. Ramone turned to his back, looked up at the sky as it released heavy drops of rain onto his face and laughed, spitting out blood in Wilson's direction. Livid, Wilson bent over and pulled Ramone to his feet, half way up, he punched Ramone again, splitting his lip further. 






He held Ramone by his neck delivering blow after blow, ignoring Cian’s cries for him to stop. He was too far gone for reason and for a split second, thought about continuing until Ramone’s body lay motionless on the cold wet concrete. With each blow, he thought of Renee, thought of what Ramone said about hurting Cian,and the hell he couldn’t only imagine Ramone had put Anna through.







Wilson please!” Cian begged him, crying over the loud patter of rain and rumble of thunder. “Let’s just go Wilson, please!” She ran toward him and held his arm. He glance over his shoulder at her and instantly felt guilt for allowing her to see him that way. Wilson roughly released the back of Ramone’s neck, allowing his head the hit the ground with a popping sound. He stood over him straightening his clothes, “This is the last time I’m going to tell you,” He stepped over him and roped his arm around Cian’s, “Stay away from her!”
Wilson pulled Cian toward his car, too overwhelmed with guilt to look at her. Would she still love him after this? See him as some angry, violent monster, incapable of self-control?  No better than Ramone? He’d pushed her in his quest to get to Ramone, a regrettable action he'd never stop apologizing for, something he’d never forgive himself for doing.

Wilson dug his hand into his pocket to retrieve the keys when they both heard shuffling behind them. 





Wilson glanced over his shoulder slightly and for the second time, pushed Cian out of the way. Ramone lunged at them with a sharp six inch blade tightly clenched in his fist. Wilson raised his hand, catching Ramone’s arm in the air. They struggled, fell onto the ground and began to roll around, the knife buried between them.





Cian was slow getting up from the ground, everything around her was spinning, and the cool wet ground sent her body into shock. She heard a deep gasp and forced her eyes to adjust to the sight as her ears tried to pinpoint the sound. In a split second, Ramone laid still on the ground, Wilson knelt before him, pushing himself to his feet. “Wilson?” She called to him in a low broken tone.
He backed up toward her, his eyes focused on Ramone as a pool of blood formed around his body and his chest heaved rapidly. “Wilson?” She called to him again. 



Wilson turned to her, his face apologetic as he held his hands firmly against his abdomen. He took another step toward her and dropped to his knees, his eyes conveying one last apology.

**Thank you SO MUCH Karima for editing the last shot for me!

13 comments:

Valpre said...

OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG!OMG! OMG!OMG! OMG!OMG! OMG!

*faints and cries and screams*

What just happened?

No, don't tell me Will's dead. Please don't say he's dead. Cian get your butt off the ground and rush the man to a hospital. While you're at it, leave Ramone's body on the sidewalk, and let's hope someone runs him over, just to make sure he dies.

Qui, this was amazing. The fight scene was so intense, I kept closing my eyes, afraid of the damage Will was causing. I had to feel my face just to make sure it was still in tact, those blows from Will, I swear I could feel them.

Shit, this doesn't look good for Will if he lives. It doesn't look good at all.

Oh, the horror, the horror. I can't take this anymore. Where's the next update.

DaijahV said...

OMG NO! WHAT? WILSON! OMG Cian help him! OMG call the police an ambulance! SOMETHING! OMG

WHY DID YOU STOP HERE?!! Where's the next one?!

This is torture OMG please tell me sexy eyes is ok! OMG Qui this wasn't nice not at all>>!!>afankldfnkan EEEEKKKK I'm freaking out!!

Did he at least stab Ramone? Fuck!!!

OMG...not cool Qui!

strelitzia19 said...

Finally caught up. OMG what just happened!? I can't believe Will is hurt, I really hope he is going to be OK. Good on him for pounding Ramone, I wouldn't have been able to stop, I don't think. lol He definitely deserves everything he gets. Your shots were stunning, the lighting, the angle, just stunning :D

Jillyson said...

OMG, QUI! You can't leave us hanging like this!!! My mind is blown - I can't even talk!!!

Cian, get that boy to the hospital NOW!!!

CaramelChick4u said...

OMG...I'm speechless...But I do hope Wilson's OK...great writing and pics :)..

Aussie Karima said...

~ Wow, I knew something dramatic was coming!!!!!!
~ But not this outcome!(",)

Anonymous said...

:OOOOOOOOOOO
OMG, If Wilson knows what's good for him, he'll stay alive!!

Anonymous said...

just gotta leave is hanging!! silly me for thinking that they were going to be able to leave after the fist fight and leave things like that.
and aint no way wilson is gonna die...not after all of his hard work. i refuse to believe it!!

holleyberry said...

Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Please don't Die!!!!!

*Runs away Screaming!!!!!

The Lunar Fox said...

So funny, I get to the end and look at the comments and we all had the same reaction. I'm like, "What the-- OMG it can't end there!"

Eagerly waiting for the next update!

Muzegoddess said...

NOOOOOO!!!!! Wilson can't die, he just absolutley CANNOT DIE!!!! Please no. Please :(

Anonymous said...

if you do this to me i will really disown you this time. almost 20 years if friendship or not. you can't do this type of thing to me that like putting a full buffet in front of me and telling me i can't eat it

Anonymous said...

It was so satisfying watching Wilson beat up Ramone but I am concerned about his wound and I hope he can get away from Ramone before any more damage is done.