Wednesday, January 26, 2011

59. Simple

Genre: Drama, Romance
Characters:  Ramone, Cian, Renee
Prompt: 59. Simple
Word Count: 563
Rating: R
Type: series
Summary: Ramone pushes, Renee helps Cian pull away
Warnings: Sexual situation, 
** Lo siento= I'm sorry
siento que= feel it
cuidado= careful




Cian dropped the smaller suitcase on top of her other suitcase with a loud grunt as she finally managed to get it to close. She’d spent most of the afternoon packing it with any and everything she’d possible need for the weekend trip Renee was forcing her to go on. “Where exactly are you going?” Ramone leaned against the wall with his arms pressed tightly against his chest. “I don’t know. Renee wants us to have a girl’s weekend so I’m guessing somewhere we can shop, drink, and throw dollars at strippers.” She laughed, snapping the last latch on the suitcase. She turned, straightened her face to match Ramone’s. “Relax! I’m just joking.” She drew her attention back to the suitcase and rolled her eyes. He was so uptight now, easily angered by the simplest things. 




Lo siento,” He made small steps toward her, “I’m sorry.” He slid his hands up around her waist, pulling her into him, his body instantly reacted. She froze, feeling his arousal press against her as he moved her hair away from her neck, kissing a trail up to her ear, “Siento que? I have something for you…” He slipped one hand underneath her shirt as the other worked at the button on her jeans. “I have to pack.” She tried to ease out of his arms but he tightened his grip, lifted the cup of bar as he ran his finger roughly across her nipple and successfully unzipped her jeans. Being so close, ready to devour her whole, the kisses he placed on her neck grew urgent with the throbbing of his groin. Despite her protest and obvious attempts to stop him, he continued running his tongue and lips along her skin, aggressively whipping her around in his arms. “Ramone…” She tried to hold his hand still through her shirt, “I’m not ready!” She was finally able to pull away and fix her clothes. Ramone groaned, ran his hand through his hair with a frustrated sigh. 




“How long are you going to make me wait?” He pulling her back into his arms showing her the impact she had on him.




“Ready?” Renee burst into the room.
“Perfect timing, Renee…” Ramone mumbled as Cian released herself from their embrace.
“Oh you’re welcome!” She smirked with an intense stare. “Cian,” She finally took her eyes off of Ramone, “you packed short dresses, right?”
“Where are you going that she needs short dresses?” Ramone cut in before Cian could speak.
“Away.” She retorted with hardened features.
They watched each other intensely. Renee was purposely trying to piss him off and he knew it. He wasn’t going to fall for it, lash out and risk losing Cian before he completely had her.
“Cuidado,” The corner of his lips turned, “there are men that see a pair of nice legs and will do whatever they need to do to get between them. Don’t have my baby falling victim to that.”
Renee smirked again, “Oh no, my job has always been to protect this baby from deadbeats. That isn’t going to change now!”




They watched each other again, he smiled, glared at her with another silent warning before kissing Cian’s hand and leaving the room. Renee knew something and was going to be a problem. One he’d have to solve with a simple solution the second they came back from their trip.

16 comments:

Valpre said...

I can just kiss Renee, very clever on her part to whisk Cian away. Hopefully wherever they're going they'll bump into Will. I can just see that reunion.

For a second I was so afraid Ramone wouldn't take no for an answer. I'm glad he backed off before things got ugly. The pics aren't loading, so I'll have to come back later to check them out.

Great update.

Qui. said...

After talking to Will and hearing him say he didn't now what to do, she had to take action somehow. Getting Cian away from Ramone is the only way she can talk to her without his influence. I don't think Cian would be too happy to see him. He is a reminder of what she wants but can't have.

He wouldn't have taken no for an answer had Renee not walked in when she did. He would have tried his hand again and this time, he would have gotten what he wanted.

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Aussie Karima said...

~ That snake in the grass is determind!
~ I have a very strong feeling that he was going to claim his prize,whether she said no or not!
~ He would not have backed down,but thank's to Renee,he had no choice,I wonder why he waited so long???
~ You can see he was trying to mark his territory before she left his sight!;)
~ I just hope Renee can undo what Ramone has done to Cian!!!!
~ Loved it Qui!(",)

Qui. said...

He was determined! An yes, he was going to claim his rightfully earned prize weather she allowed it or not! Cian is strong. Much stronger than Anna. He hasn't been able to work his magic on Cian like he did with Anna. Cian is like a complex riddle to him. After he has figured out the main pieces, he can solve it. The complex pieces being Will of course. Now that she isn't seeing Will, speaking of Will and appears to be over Will (in his eyes) he can move in and go for what he wants.
Renee will definitely try!
Thank you Karima!

Luv4gaj said...

Great update. I wonder if Renee will tell Cian about Ramones shady past. I have a feeling he wants to knock Cian up so he can have total control of her once and for all, even if he doesn't truly love her. SMH

DaijahV said...

YOU GO RENEE!! WOOT! I love her so much! Awesome best friend AND WTF is Ramone planning? Solve a problem? Please! You can't get rid of her best friend threat or not, you try something and lose Cian (hopefully) I want you to you freaking deadbeat mumble grumble! Great update!!

Anonymous said...

W2G Renee! She did an awesome job of busting in and taking Cian away from his dirty dirty thoughts! :)
Cian needs to be very stern with him or he won't give up.... she will be pressured.

Anonymous said...

I am looking forward to seeing how their weekend away goes. Renee seems to know what is best.

Qui. said...

Luv: Thank you! Renee will tell her! She isn't going to risk the same think happening to Cian! He probably will try, probably was trying!

Qui. said...

Daijah: Very true! He hurts Renee and Cian will not only be out of his life but Eric will be on his ass! He is very protective of Renee and would try his damnedest to move a mountain if that's what she wanted! Thank you :)

Qui. said...

Kristen: you're right about her being firm! She should have screamed it!

Qui. said...

seaweedy: Renee is going to make sure Cian walks away from their trip with open eyes. Since I'm snowed in, I'm working on the resort they are running away to. so it should be up soon.

S.B. said...

It's good to see Cian begin to realize what she's dealing with. That man is scary. I'm glad Renee is intervening. A man who treats women like that is nothing but a predator.

holleyberry said...

This is so wrong, but that man is damn sexy!
Not as sexy as Will, but yum-o still!

Qui. said...

lol beautiful sunday hat!

Pixx08 said...

OMG Holley i was thinking the same thing but i didn't want to sound twisted